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Those dreams...
That not of nightmares.
But of Death
of yours
That plague you
Haunt you
Till you'll
WAKE
Gasping for breathe 
With sleep still begging for you to comfort her
And you only running blind into demons
Till you scream to let go
To awaken 
Yet you still hear it
That once lulling begging you
Turning into mockery
Dont ask...i know it's really bad but i wrote it agian at past midnight so you know what it's shite i know ":[
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lostinthesun Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Student Photographer
this is really good, i love it :)
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Ladybuglet Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love, for writing this in the middle of the night you did a really good job X3 it's dark and sorrowful ;3; but I still like it
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SteamPunkFreakster Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like it big brother.
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SmokeyDan13 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It'd bad
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SteamPunkFreakster Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nein, it isn't.
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Candi-Rhodes Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it :iconsupertighthugplz:
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SmokeyDan13 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's bad
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Candi-Rhodes Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you did great it shows deep emotions and I like things that show emotion :iconkawaiihugplz:
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SmokeyDan13 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Though it's put together do badly
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Candi-Rhodes Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No its not I enjoyed it a lot :hug:
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